Tuesday, 29 November 2011

Target

My target is to make sure i have finished my dialogue by next week.

Tuesday, 22 November 2011

Dialogue Naughts and Crosses

1)INT. In Mrs Hadley's house. Day.
Lynette, mid thirties white with Blondie hair wearing trousers shirt and an apron, is sweeping the floor of Mr and Mrs Hadley's kitchen. Mr Hadley, mid forties tall tough black guy wearing a suit walks in the kitchen with his wife Minerva Hadley in her mid thirties black with braided hair tied back wearing a cream dress.

Mrs Hadley: 
Lynette would you come over please.

Lynette: 
Yes ma'am

MR Hadley: 
Lynette where was Minerva yesterday night.

Lynette: 
She was out in the club sir.

Mr Hadley walks over and slaps Mrs Hadley and walks away 

Mrs Hadley: 
Lynette you was supposed to cover for me your fired! 

2)INT. In Lynette's house. Night.
Lynette wearing a night gown with her hair down. and her husband Ryan a white man with brown hair mid forties average not tall not short wearing purple striped pyjamas are having a conversation in their bedroom.
Lynette:
Ryan  i don't think i can tell Jude this so  that he can understand.
Ryan: 
what is it honey?
Lynette: 
I lost my job
Ryan:
How we going to send Jude to school?
Lynette:
i don't know hes a naught hes only allowed to go school until hes thirteen.
Ryan: 
i will talk to him, he will be very disappointed but he will understand.

3)EXT. Persephone and Callum at Sephys mom's private beach. Day.
Sephy short for persephone, black age 14 daughter of MR and MRS Hadley wearing shorts a shirt and slippers with braided hair. Callum white,brown hair 15 son Of Mr and Mrs McGregor wearing jeans and a t-shirt are sitting down talking and watching the waves.

Sephy:
Callum i'm so happy that  your moving in to my school.
Callum: 
So am i.
Sephy:
i cannot believe it its the first school to allow noughts to join.
Callum: 
I know its going to be hard for us noughts .
Sephy:
Everything will be okay.
Callum:
come on its getting late lets go.
they stand up and walk opposite directions


EXT. Out side Heathcroft High school . Day.
Crosses student all gather around protesting wearing black and red uniform.

Cross Students:
WE DON'T WANT BLANKERS IN OUR SCHOOL!
                         WE DON'T WANT BLANKERS IN OUR SCHOOL!
Sephy:
stop it there people just like us.
MR. Hadley:
Alright everyone calm down and get in to school before every single one of yous loose your places here?
 students make their way inside the school

 INT. In a classroom. Day.
Callum and sephy in their uniform walk in the same class room. Mr Badiocho a tall black man, wearing a back suit sitting behind a desk.

MR.Badiocho:
Okay class come in and sit down. Callum i don't want you to sit at the frnt go find a space at the back.
Callum: 
why sir?
MR Badiocho: 
Are you questioning me?
Class: 
Because your a blanker.
Callum: 
i would like to speak to the principle Mrs Umbwokompopo
Mr Badiocho:
not during my class time now take your blanker's ass to the end of the room before i knock some sence in to you.
Mrs Umbwokompopo walks in the class room
MR Badiocho:
Mrs Umbwompopo  callum is refusing to take orders.
Callum: 
But mrs i dont understand why i have to sit at the back.

Mrs Umbwokompopo: 
thats beacuse your a blanker. Ur blank! your brain is blank! and ur skin is blank not a bit of colour in you! 

Callum:
I might be a blanker and white but i belive that we should all have equal rights but you daggers dont understand that dou you!.

Mrs Umbwokompopo:
Callum McGegor how dare you say them words to me, we are crosses you are naughts things can never be the same between us now get out of my school!

callum walks out 
 
EXT. Out side sephys house. Day.
sephy wearing a light blue dress is in the black limo ready to be driven by a white short butler, dressed in white suiteto boarding school while she says good bye to her mom who is wearing a posh red skirt and a blouse. Callum comes running with his jeans and a white shirt but the limo is already driving off so he goes in to the coffie shop. 

Sephy: 
i cannot belive callum dint even come and say good bye.

Menirva: 
well darling i told you to stay away from them blankers they do nothing but harm

Sephy: 
But mom callum wouldnt do that to me 

Menirva:
your farther would have you killed if he finds out your hanging with that boy

Sephy: 
I dont care any way bye mom

Menirva:
Bye darling take care love you 

Sephy: 
 love you to 

sephys limo is driving off and callum is running behind it.
  
callum: 
sephy please wait! sephy
Persephone please............

he stops and walk in the coffee shop
  
INT. IN the Liberation Militia (L.M) .Day.
(3 years later) Jude is white tall with brown hair twenty one years old dressed in blue jeans and a white shirt. Callums brother who is the head of the L.M is having a conversation at a park.

Jude:
im so happy little brother you finally joined

callum:
im not little im eighteen now

Jude: 
I have a job for you if you complete it, you will have proved to me that you are not little anymore.

calum: 
okay your on what is it?

Jude: 
your little dagger friend Perserphone Hadley shes back, i want you to kidnap her and bring her to me.

callum:
why do i have to do it?

Jude: 
because you know her and she will come if you ask her to meet you.

callum: 
okay.

EXT. In the cell Day.
Sephy wearing black trousers and a blue top is put in the sell after being captured at a beach. she gets asked by jude to do a recording so they can send it to her farther.

Callum:
im sorry sephy but i have to do this 

Sephy:
i cant belive you callum after all we have ben through

callum: 
shut up and read the script you have been given

sephy:
no!

jude:
if she wont do as she is asked her shoot her

callum: 
sephy please

sephy:
hi dad i have been kidnapped in order for me to survive you need to meet up  with these peole at midnight today at heathcroft street with eighty thousand grand.

jude:
thought so little miss im rich and black doesn't wanna die does she? Good job callum, you stay with this dagger here while me and the rest get ready to collect the money.

callum:
okay jude.

sephy: 
feel free to kill me now

callum:
sephy i dint want to do this but i  had to follow my orders please forgive me.

sephy: 
kiss ma black ass kmt!

callum: 
sephy please i never stopped loving you ever since i stood and watched your limo drive off i would of walked if i could just so i could be with you but i recived your letter late im so sorry.

sephy: 
you actually came, oh callum but then why all this callum why have you forgotten thers no nought or cross nor black or white or blanker and dagger between us its sephy and callum

callum : 
i know sephy, i know that i love you sephy 

sephy: 
i love you too callum.
They make love 

Jude:
QUICK GET UP RUN WHAT THE HELL CALLUM YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO WATCH AND WHY IS YOUR SHIRT INSIDE OUT ?WE HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE QUICK RUN! GRAB THAT DAGGER WITH YOU! 
they run outside 

callum: 
sephy run quickley run home im soo sorry 

sephy: 
thank you callum. 

callum lets her escape as they run towards the woods
 
 
EXT. In Sephy's house. Night.
sephywearing a grey hoodie and joggin bottoms  sitting in her room with her sister jasmin skinny black braded hair tied back wearing a green dress twenty years old. Mr and Mrs Hadley walk in both dressed very smart bith dressed in black suit.
jasmin: 
sephy are you pregnant

sephy: 
 no why 

jasmin: 
 sephy im your sister im also not stupid i see you wearing baggy clothes thats not you how long do you want to hide it under your baggy hoodies?

sephy:
dont tell mom or dad

jasmin: 
too late peole have seen your bump out side its all over the news.

Menerva: 
excuse me and your dad just barging in here with out knocking but we need to talk.

kamal: 
sephy dear we know your preganant and dont worry were going to have the baby aborted.

sephy: 
im not having an abortion

kamal: 
you are sephy we cant let you have this child after getting raped by them blankers who kidnapped you

sephy:
i never got raped its callums child. 

kamal stands up and slaps sephy and they all walk out.
sephy hears some one knocking on her garden window she looks out to find callum she goes outside.


sephy: callum what are you doing here 

callum: sephy i herd you are pregnant and i here to support lets runaway alone 

sephy: yes if our childs a boy ill call him ryan for your dad.

callum: if its a girl ill call it rose because of this garden full of rose when were deciding her name

sephy: how about callierose 
callum i like that it-

Kamal: WHAT IS A BLANKER DOING IN MY HOUSE SECURITY TAKE HIM TO PRISON! 
sephy: no daddy no.. callum no...


EXT. In the prison cell. day.
Mr. Hadley goes to the cell to speak to callum dressed in his normal suit.

MR.Hadley: 
callum I'm giving you two options. I want you to announce that you raped Sephy on the news so that she can have an abortion and you will stay 8 years in prison or you dont and you get hanged tomorrow morning.
 callum:
Mr. Hadkey i shall give you my answer tomorrow.
 Mr.Hadely:
I dont have time for that.
the decision is made

 

EXT. In sephys room. day.
MR hadleywals in sephys room with a white shirt and black trousers sephy sitting on her bed looking outside her window in her dressing gown.
kamal:
sephy i have two optiones for yoy, you get rid of the baby callum lives. You keep the baby callum dies. now if you really love this blanker you would want him to survive 
the decision is made.  

INT.out side prison. Day
Jack mid twenties hes white dressed in a white t-shirt and black trousers is taking callum who is wearing a white top and blue jeans to get hangged.

Jacke:

sorry calum but ive been orderd to do this.

callum:
its okay jack i know just make sure you get my letter to sephy please

Jacke:
don't worry i will.

he puts a nose on callums neck. sephy comes running in to watch callums execution

Sephy:
I LOVE YOU CALLUM OUR BABY WILL LOVE YOU TOO!

callum:
I LOVE YOU TOO SEPHY AND OUR BABY

sephy:
I LOVE YOU CALLUM

callum:
I LOVE YOU TOO SEPH.....

EXT. At mercy Hospital. Night.
On the 20th of July Persephone Hadley and Callum McGregor (deceased) have a beatiful baby girl called CallieRose McGregor.

Tuesday, 8 November 2011

Scene breakdown ( Naughts and Crosses)

INT. In Mrs Hadley's house. Day.
Lynette is working when Mr and Mrs Hadley walk in and Lynette gets called over who was supposed to be covering a lie for Mrs Haley but forgets. Mrs Hadley gets a slap from Mr Hadley then he walks away. Mrs Hadley turns to Lynette and Fires her. 

INT. In Lynette's house. Night.
Lynette and her husband Ryan are discussing how they cannont send Jude to school since she has no job.

EXT. Sephy and Callum at Sephys mom's private beach. Day.
Sephy and Callum are sitting down discussing about Callum moving in a school where is ruled by crosses and the first school to accept crosses. They sit and watch the waves then they both get up and have to go.

EXT. Out side Highcoft High school . Day.
Crosses student all gather around protesting they do not want any naughts students in their school. Sephy tries to stop them but what can she do when was just one and loads of other crosses. One naught gets injured news reporters are there so is Sephys dad since he is the member of the government. everything gets calmed down and they get in the main building.

INT. In a classroom. Day.
Callum and Sephy are in the same class. All the teachers at this school are black and they do not like the white students they discriminate against them. However Callum is not going to sit down and get discriminated so he sticks up for his rights and gets kicked out of school.

EXT. Out side sephys house. Day.
sephy is in the car ready to drive off to boarding school. Callum arives late to see the car driving away who received sephys letter late a bout them running away together. Callum runs for the car but the car is too fast for him so he turns back and heads towards the coffee bar.

INT. IN the Liberation Militia (L.M) .Day.
Jude Callums brother who is the head of the L.M convinces callum to join so he does since sephy left him he thought that was the best option. Part of the jobs he got given is to kidnap Sephy when they found out she was back three years later.

EXT. In the cell Day.
Sephy is put in the sell after being captured a video is sent to her dad to let him know she was there so that he can pay money to get his daughter back. He agrees while Jude and the rest head off to collect the money callum is put in charge of sephy. They speak and remember all the times they had together. They end up sleeping with eachother because they both loved eachother. Others return with out the money Sephys dad set them up and was cooming after them in the cell so they had to run away which gave Sephy a chance to run away Callum runs after her but lets her escape.

EXT. In Sephy's house. Night.
Sephy finds out that she is pregnant and it is all over the news. Callum hears about the news and sneaks in Sephys room to go talk to her. They agreed to keep the baby and Sephy said if it was a boy she would call him Ryn callums dad because he got killed by a black policeman. Callum said if it was a girl to call her callie rose. Just as they plan to runaway and live together Callum gets caught and put in jail. 

EXT. In the prison cell. day.
MR hadley goes and speaks to callum and tell him in order to survive he has to make a public announcment that he raped sephy and got her pregnant or he is getting hanged. He refused to make the announcment.


EXT. In sephys room. day.
MR hadley tells sephy to have an abortion to save callums life but she did  not agree to that idea since her and callum have agreed to keep the baby.

INT.out side prison. Day
Callum walks out the prison doors and searches through the crowed if Sephy was there to see his last moments on earth but he did not find her. His face gets covered ready to get hanged he hears sephy shouting i love you callum he replys her saying he loves her too then he gets hanged.

EXT. At mercy Hospital. Night.
On the 20th of July Persephone Hadley and Callum McGregor (deceased) have a beatiful baby girl called CallieRose McGregor.
 

 




CHARACTER PROFILE QUESTIONS

  • What is your character's full name? Persephone Hadley
  • What is their preferred nickname? Sephy
  • How old is your character throughout the majority of the story? fifteen
  • What is their date of birth? 20th July 1996
  • What is their place of birth? America
  • Are they male or female? Female
  • Where do they live now? America 
  • Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed? Widowed
  • Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many? 1 Sister
  • What is your character's overall health like? Very good
  • What type of personality does your character have? she has two different personalities 1 shes very emotional 2. rude and has a attitude.
  • What is their Ethnic background and religion? Black American Christian
  • What is their current occupation? They don't have any
  • What level of education does your character have? Well Educated
  • What does your character like or love? She likes spending time with Callum. And she loves him as well.
  • What does your character dislike or hate? she hates the discrimination between the Naughts and Crosses.

  • What is your character's full name? Callum McGregor
  • What is their preferred nickname? They don't have one
  • How old is your character throughout the majority of the story? seventeen
  • What is their date of birth? 3rd May 1994
  • What is their place of birth? America
  • Are they male or female? male
  • Where do they live now? Dead
  • Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed?
  • Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many? 1 brother 1 sister
  • What is your character's overall health like? Good
  • What type of personality does your character have? 1 hes is very caring
  • What is their Ethnic background and religion? White American christian
  • What is their current occupation?
  • What level of education does your character have? low
  • What does your character like or love? He likes spending time with Sephy and he loves her as well.
  • What does your character dislike or hate? He hates some Crosses.

Friday, 4 November 2011

Structure of my Documentary

My documentary will start with a question.
does god exist?  ( in text)

i will have short answers from random people with different opinions.
then i want the same people to extend their answers.
 Then i want a short scenes from different temples. I will ask them the same question?

Where is the the proof that God exist?  ( In text)
Ask the people that said yes that God exist

Why don't you think God does not exist? (in text) 

Finally- What is the purpose of life? ( in text)
Ask every one for opinion.

FIRST
Does God exist get just random people to say (yes and no)
and the main people.
Then go to the main people and ask them to expand their answers.

Which are:

1) Mrs Noble yes...... where is the proof that god exist.
2) Miss thomas
No..... Why dont you belive that god exist.
3) Miss Bharuchi Yes.... Where is proof that god exist.

1) Random Student no... why?
2) A muslim Student  Nasra Abdi & Yousef fazelpor yes why?
3) Christain student ( foster) Yes.......

Finally What is the Purpose of your life
1) Mrs Noble
2) Mrs Turpin
3) Mrs Bharuchi

Tuesday, 18 October 2011

Anchorman scenes

1st Scene  Road
2nd Scene Car park
3rd Scene Street
4th Scene Barber shop
5th Scene Street
6th Scene Wall
7th Scene Street
8th Scene News room
9th Scene Bar
10th Scene House
11th Scene News
12th Scene Sea
13th Scene Bar
14th Scene News
15th Scene 4 Scenes at once
1st scene hes talking to his mom who's in a car outside school 
2nd scene in a class room.
3rd scene out side in a playground
4th scene inside in the reseption
5th scene in a medical room 
6th scene in a office 
7th scene in a empty class room
8th scene in a long corridor
9th scene in a empty class room

Friday, 14 October 2011

Does God exist?

DOES GOD EXIST? WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF LIFE? 

My documentary will be based on religion. what is the purpose of life?
In my documentary i'm going to have opinions from different religions and from people who do not think that god exist and belive that this whole creation was made by science?

Tuesday, 11 October 2011

Naughts and Crosses


Mrs McGregor
Mrs Hadley
Mr hadley

Sephy Hadley

Callum McGregor













A world ruled by Crosses (Black people -Daggers) where Naughts(white people Blankers) have really low status (Blankers)
the Blankers have to work for the Black people to earn a living.

Daggers and Blankers cannot Mix. Sephy is a Dagger and Callum is a Blanker can they stay together?

Sephy is fifteen and Callum is Seventeen they have known each other since childhood. Callum's mother Lynette worked for Sephy mom Minerva. They fell out and did not contact each other any more but Callum and Shephy carried on seeing each other. Callum even moved in Sephy school where there were only a few blankers. they have a lot of problems and Callum gets kicked out of school. Sephy could not carry on going so she decides to run away with Callum but Callum receives the letter late from Sephy so she think that Callum did not want to go with her so she decides to go a boarding school.

Years passed Callum decided to join the Liberation militia a group where they fight for their equal rights. where they explode bombs and other things to get back on the black people. Sephy finishes school and comes back. Callum sends a letter to Cara's hose as he was aware that she was back but it was a trap to kidnap her to get money of Sephy's farther Mr Hadley who was the government Callum had changed and forgotten all the times he spent with Sephy with all the love and fun times they shared. she gets Kidnapped and placed in a cell and they send a video to Sephys farther to let him know that they have his daughter. Mr Hadley agrees to give them money to get his daughter back alive.

while Callum was guarding Sephys cell when the rest went to get the money  he went in and spoke to Cara and remembered the good times they had they said they loved each other and end up making love. The others return some never made it because Mr Hadley had set them up and killed and put some in prison so they had to run away while they were getting away Sephy managed to escape and hide they went out looking for her Callum finds her and lets her escape.

Sephy gets home after a couple of weeks she realises she is pregnant and its all over the news. When Callum received this News she sneaked in Sephys back garden to come and speak to her that's when he gets caught and sent to prison. Sephy's parents try force her to have an abortion but she does not want to her and Callum decide they want to keep the baby her  farther is furious with her daughter and called her Blanker bitch.

Sephys farther goes to see Callum and tell him to make a public announcement that he raped Sephy when she got kidnapped and got her pregnant then he wont get hanged. He disagrees to make the announcement. So Mr Hadley told Sephy if she has an abortion Callum will not be hanged but she also disagreed since her and Callum have agreed on keeping the baby. When they were in Sephy's back garden they agreed if the baby's a girl the will call her Callie rose and if it was a boy they will call it Jude.

On 20 of July in mercy hospital
Sephy Hadley and Callum McGregor ( deceased)  have
a beautiful daughter called Callie rose

she decided to move from her house since her farther was responsible for Callum's death and the rest of her family dis not support because Jude was a blanker she rises her child on her own