Tuesday, 11 October 2011

Naughts and Crosses


Mrs McGregor
Mrs Hadley
Mr hadley

Sephy Hadley

Callum McGregor













A world ruled by Crosses (Black people -Daggers) where Naughts(white people Blankers) have really low status (Blankers)
the Blankers have to work for the Black people to earn a living.

Daggers and Blankers cannot Mix. Sephy is a Dagger and Callum is a Blanker can they stay together?

Sephy is fifteen and Callum is Seventeen they have known each other since childhood. Callum's mother Lynette worked for Sephy mom Minerva. They fell out and did not contact each other any more but Callum and Shephy carried on seeing each other. Callum even moved in Sephy school where there were only a few blankers. they have a lot of problems and Callum gets kicked out of school. Sephy could not carry on going so she decides to run away with Callum but Callum receives the letter late from Sephy so she think that Callum did not want to go with her so she decides to go a boarding school.

Years passed Callum decided to join the Liberation militia a group where they fight for their equal rights. where they explode bombs and other things to get back on the black people. Sephy finishes school and comes back. Callum sends a letter to Cara's hose as he was aware that she was back but it was a trap to kidnap her to get money of Sephy's farther Mr Hadley who was the government Callum had changed and forgotten all the times he spent with Sephy with all the love and fun times they shared. she gets Kidnapped and placed in a cell and they send a video to Sephys farther to let him know that they have his daughter. Mr Hadley agrees to give them money to get his daughter back alive.

while Callum was guarding Sephys cell when the rest went to get the money  he went in and spoke to Cara and remembered the good times they had they said they loved each other and end up making love. The others return some never made it because Mr Hadley had set them up and killed and put some in prison so they had to run away while they were getting away Sephy managed to escape and hide they went out looking for her Callum finds her and lets her escape.

Sephy gets home after a couple of weeks she realises she is pregnant and its all over the news. When Callum received this News she sneaked in Sephys back garden to come and speak to her that's when he gets caught and sent to prison. Sephy's parents try force her to have an abortion but she does not want to her and Callum decide they want to keep the baby her  farther is furious with her daughter and called her Blanker bitch.

Sephys farther goes to see Callum and tell him to make a public announcement that he raped Sephy when she got kidnapped and got her pregnant then he wont get hanged. He disagrees to make the announcement. So Mr Hadley told Sephy if she has an abortion Callum will not be hanged but she also disagreed since her and Callum have agreed on keeping the baby. When they were in Sephy's back garden they agreed if the baby's a girl the will call her Callie rose and if it was a boy they will call it Jude.

On 20 of July in mercy hospital
Sephy Hadley and Callum McGregor ( deceased)  have
a beautiful daughter called Callie rose

she decided to move from her house since her farther was responsible for Callum's death and the rest of her family dis not support because Jude was a blanker she rises her child on her own




1 comment:

  1. You have worked hard here Sumaiya. There is lots of detail here and you have listened to what I said about developing characters.

    The next thing you need to do is to break your story idea into scenes. My gut feeling is you might have to simplify your plot slightly; I think you have more than five minutes here.

    Work out where each section will happen from start to finish and break it down into locations.

    Well done, you've worked hard here.

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