Tuesday, 8 November 2011

Scene breakdown ( Naughts and Crosses)

INT. In Mrs Hadley's house. Day.
Lynette is working when Mr and Mrs Hadley walk in and Lynette gets called over who was supposed to be covering a lie for Mrs Haley but forgets. Mrs Hadley gets a slap from Mr Hadley then he walks away. Mrs Hadley turns to Lynette and Fires her. 

INT. In Lynette's house. Night.
Lynette and her husband Ryan are discussing how they cannont send Jude to school since she has no job.

EXT. Sephy and Callum at Sephys mom's private beach. Day.
Sephy and Callum are sitting down discussing about Callum moving in a school where is ruled by crosses and the first school to accept crosses. They sit and watch the waves then they both get up and have to go.

EXT. Out side Highcoft High school . Day.
Crosses student all gather around protesting they do not want any naughts students in their school. Sephy tries to stop them but what can she do when was just one and loads of other crosses. One naught gets injured news reporters are there so is Sephys dad since he is the member of the government. everything gets calmed down and they get in the main building.

INT. In a classroom. Day.
Callum and Sephy are in the same class. All the teachers at this school are black and they do not like the white students they discriminate against them. However Callum is not going to sit down and get discriminated so he sticks up for his rights and gets kicked out of school.

EXT. Out side sephys house. Day.
sephy is in the car ready to drive off to boarding school. Callum arives late to see the car driving away who received sephys letter late a bout them running away together. Callum runs for the car but the car is too fast for him so he turns back and heads towards the coffee bar.

INT. IN the Liberation Militia (L.M) .Day.
Jude Callums brother who is the head of the L.M convinces callum to join so he does since sephy left him he thought that was the best option. Part of the jobs he got given is to kidnap Sephy when they found out she was back three years later.

EXT. In the cell Day.
Sephy is put in the sell after being captured a video is sent to her dad to let him know she was there so that he can pay money to get his daughter back. He agrees while Jude and the rest head off to collect the money callum is put in charge of sephy. They speak and remember all the times they had together. They end up sleeping with eachother because they both loved eachother. Others return with out the money Sephys dad set them up and was cooming after them in the cell so they had to run away which gave Sephy a chance to run away Callum runs after her but lets her escape.

EXT. In Sephy's house. Night.
Sephy finds out that she is pregnant and it is all over the news. Callum hears about the news and sneaks in Sephys room to go talk to her. They agreed to keep the baby and Sephy said if it was a boy she would call him Ryn callums dad because he got killed by a black policeman. Callum said if it was a girl to call her callie rose. Just as they plan to runaway and live together Callum gets caught and put in jail. 

EXT. In the prison cell. day.
MR hadley goes and speaks to callum and tell him in order to survive he has to make a public announcment that he raped sephy and got her pregnant or he is getting hanged. He refused to make the announcment.


EXT. In sephys room. day.
MR hadley tells sephy to have an abortion to save callums life but she did  not agree to that idea since her and callum have agreed to keep the baby.

INT.out side prison. Day
Callum walks out the prison doors and searches through the crowed if Sephy was there to see his last moments on earth but he did not find her. His face gets covered ready to get hanged he hears sephy shouting i love you callum he replys her saying he loves her too then he gets hanged.

EXT. At mercy Hospital. Night.
On the 20th of July Persephone Hadley and Callum McGregor (deceased) have a beatiful baby girl called CallieRose McGregor.
 

 




1 comment:

  1. Very impressed Sumaiya, you are one of the few people who have actually written the five scenes I asked you to.

    Finish off the remaining scenes and your next stage is to work on your dialogue and convert the scenes into actual scenes.

    Well done!

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